Well here we are, to the reposting of our original draft here that was posted first on theforce.net This draft is currently going through a rewrite, because the begining needs a lot of work and we are aware of the plot holes we have to fix. We were just starting out and we've been writing together for two years now.
If you have suggestions of things you'd like to see in the Gold Edition then please let us know :) We are happy to take suggestions, though we reserve the right not to use them. We'll be posting once a day until we're caught up to where we are posting in the other book. We have enough to post for a long time.
Please let us know you're here so we know who's keeping up with us just like at the other board. We love feedback :) The first edition had no quotes or chapter titles, so I'm reposting it here in the same format. The rewrite will be different. That being said, I'll post some of what we have of the rewrite tomorrow so you can compare the beginnings.
And without further ado....
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Current Music: Kyran's Theme
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